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| 10/19/2010 2:03 PM |
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| She will be a very lucky women. |
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Clockwork*
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| 10/19/2010 3:31 PM |
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| yeah if i ever get married.... |
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"They told me 'Son, you're special... You were born to do great things.' Well you know what...? They were right..." - Jack *Bioschock 1*
I sit in this chair in awe of how you have this effect on me. It's as if I went to a pharmicist and they handed me you. When I smell you I become intoxicated by your narcotic aroma. I am addicted to you as if you were some specialized nicotine. I swallow your gaze like ecstasy. Please sedate me and do what you wish; never cease to be my personal prescribed heroin...
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| 10/19/2010 6:06 PM |
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| MAybe you will one day. Trust God he will show you who it is, and she will love you the way you deserve. And it will last forever. |
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Clockwork*
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| 10/20/2010 3:55 PM |
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"They told me 'Son, you're special... You were born to do great things.' Well you know what...? They were right..." - Jack *Bioschock 1*
I sit in this chair in awe of how you have this effect on me. It's as if I went to a pharmicist and they handed me you. When I smell you I become intoxicated by your narcotic aroma. I am addicted to you as if you were some specialized nicotine. I swallow your gaze like ecstasy. Please sedate me and do what you wish; never cease to be my personal prescribed heroin...
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dc_88keys4christ
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| 01/09/2011 4:21 AM |
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| well, I wrote a song to my future husband... It was in March, so almost a year ago. It encouraged me to wait, so I guess it can be healthy, in a proper setting, at least. |
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Clockwork*
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| 01/09/2011 9:31 AM |
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| Thats awesome Darcie. I know he will appreciate it very much. |
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"They told me 'Son, you're special... You were born to do great things.' Well you know what...? They were right..." - Jack *Bioschock 1*
I sit in this chair in awe of how you have this effect on me. It's as if I went to a pharmicist and they handed me you. When I smell you I become intoxicated by your narcotic aroma. I am addicted to you as if you were some specialized nicotine. I swallow your gaze like ecstasy. Please sedate me and do what you wish; never cease to be my personal prescribed heroin...
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| 01/09/2011 12:12 PM |
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Oh my word I love your poems they are SO sweet!!!! Your future wife will be one lucky lady :-)
Hey I a little advice I got from a book is along with writing poems and letters and stuff also pray for her! I pray for my future husband and I write him letters and I let him know I'm praying for him in my letters and it's allot of fun! Like you said it's a good way to express your feelings |
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Clockwork*
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| 01/09/2011 12:15 PM |
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Thanks Daughter of the king, I will try to do that too! |
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"They told me 'Son, you're special... You were born to do great things.' Well you know what...? They were right..." - Jack *Bioschock 1*
I sit in this chair in awe of how you have this effect on me. It's as if I went to a pharmicist and they handed me you. When I smell you I become intoxicated by your narcotic aroma. I am addicted to you as if you were some specialized nicotine. I swallow your gaze like ecstasy. Please sedate me and do what you wish; never cease to be my personal prescribed heroin...
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dc_88keys4christ
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| 01/10/2011 10:28 AM |
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| Hi Clockwork*, this is my favorite line from your stuff: I swallow your gaze like ecstasy... never cease to be my personal prescribed heroin...
I do agree with Taylor, though. Try to put God into the picture. You are already His child, so why not put Him in your writing? Maybe it's just me, but if I were to receive a letter from my husband that was written years ago, I'd be disappointed if there was no mention of God. If my bf gave me a letter of proposal, I might turn him down if it was full of sweet words about me, but no mention of God. Ugh... that would be pretty tough, I'll admit. |
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Clockwork*
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| 01/10/2011 10:48 AM |
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| Glad you like that. I have a few poems on my facebook lol. I'll try to start putting God into my poems more often. I have written some thigns to Him though. I will post them. |
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"They told me 'Son, you're special... You were born to do great things.' Well you know what...? They were right..." - Jack *Bioschock 1*
I sit in this chair in awe of how you have this effect on me. It's as if I went to a pharmicist and they handed me you. When I smell you I become intoxicated by your narcotic aroma. I am addicted to you as if you were some specialized nicotine. I swallow your gaze like ecstasy. Please sedate me and do what you wish; never cease to be my personal prescribed heroin...
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dc_88keys4christ
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| 01/10/2011 1:00 PM |
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If my bf gave me a letter of proposal, I might turn him down if it was full of sweet words about me, but no mention of God. Ugh... that would be pretty tough, I'll admit.
Except, the thing is, I don't HAVE a bf! Sorry if that confused anyone. |
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